movie notes

“I just read your notes. You are brilliant. Seriously. I've spent six months thinking about these people and couldn't see any of this. My main character was just - eluding me and now she seems so obvious - and more adorable than ever. Thank you, thank you, thank you. This is exactly what I was hoping for.”

- Lauren B., New York

“I read the notes, felt a little spanked, but then very much uplifted. I usually have a keen eye for story, but you found the essence of my hero's story, the feeling of enormous personal upheaval that I felt below the surface as he spoke. It's funny. I'm very impressed with your service. You've got my brain whirling. A very good thing.”

- Mark S., Montana

“Jamie, thank you for the notes...you have really renewed my passion for this film. I plan on having a revised script in a few weeks.”

- Kareem M., Bahamas

“Your help is more than I could have hoped. You totally absorbed the essences of my characters and found their dramatic potential so that I can now press them into displaying it. After our conversation, my mind was whirring with new ideas. I was a little nervous but your exercises prepared me. Thank you, Jamie.”

- Tim P., New Jersey
“This process has exceeded my expectations, this is going to help me tremendously. I feel like you really get the characters and your enthusiasm has driven me to keep at it. The issues you addressed were so specific and tailored to my script. Honestly, I was afraid of cookie cutter responses in hiring a consultant and you proved me completely wrong. I will definitely be using your service on all future projects.”
- Marty Anderson, New York
Thanks for being so smart, I knew you would be. My head is spinning with ideas on how to make this better. Thanks so much for your time and insights and tactfulness. I'm also working on a 2nd script, and I'll call you again to help with that.
- Adriana S., New Jersey
“It feels like forever ago since you helped me with my Buffy the Vampire Slayer spec script, so much has happened. I almost immediately got representation offers from both William Morris and CAA. Now, several movie assignments later, I'm on my third year writing for Cold Case. Everyone commented on the strong writing style in my spec and how much they loved my voice. I know your help was critical in helping me work through my blind spot for plot and structure so that my voice could really shine through.”
- Liz Garcia; Silverlake, CA
“I knew things were wrong with my script but couldn't put a finger on what it was or how to fix it. There was so much I wanted to express and it wasn't coming out on the page and I was beginning to wonder if it was even worth trying. I'm so glad I decided to take a chance on your service because you made it clear - there was so much I was doing wrong! Now that I have the answers, it seems like I should've known them all along. I had used a few consultants in the past and I was wary about going down this road again but you totally left them in the dust. You're the real deal. For the first time in a long time, I'm feeling a little bit optimistic about my script. I'm going to send everyone I know to you.”
- Brian Aarons; Manhattan Beach, CA
Jamie, I have been wanting to thank you for a while for meeting with me. My goodness how you make everything so crystal clear! Everything you said made so much sense and I wonder why I couldn't see it myself. You helped me recognize patterns within myself - now that I fully understand what my weaknesses are, I think I'll be more aware of them when I'm writing and hopefully resolve those issues for good. I will never submit any material to any network or production company without going to you first.”
- Kim Blagrove; Los Angeles, CA
“You provide better notes than I’ve ever received from anyone – and that’s the honest truth. Your suggestions helped shape my unfocused ideas and dialogue into a great, cohesive script. I have no doubt that our last consultation on my spec was integral to my being signed with an agency. I plan on using your skills on all future projects.”
- Sarah A.; Echo Park, CA
“From the first draft to now, your insight and guidance has been superb. My script has developed by leaps and bounds with your help. Having worked with other script consultants, I know that it takes a special kind of person to work with creative people and I can easily say that you have that talent. I envision having you read every project from here on out before I send them out into the world. Thanks, Jamie!”
- Ethan Bull, independent filmmaker; New York, NY
“This service was invaluable.”
- Maria C.; Hollywood, California
“Five minutes into our initial consultation on what I was calling my "draft" at the time, I knew I had only scratched the surface in taking the script where I ultimately wanted it to be and I knew you were the person who could help me get it there.”
- C. Trainor; Venice, California
“I had to write to tell you the great news. First off, my producers went crazy for the revised version of my script and loved all of your feedback that I incorporated. Even better than that, one of the big name agencies (I don't want to say which one because I don't want to jinx it!) wants to package the movie and are tossing around impressively big names to star. Thanks so much for your patience even when I butted heads with you. Your analytical skills are second to none and I believe that I wouldn't be having this kind of success without your amazing help. Pretty good start to my directorial debut!”
- Philip R.; Studio City, California
“Thanks. That was a very helpful conversation. I have a lot to work on as far as screenplay writing goes and you've given me inspiration. That sounds a little cheesy, but there it is. Thanks and I will talk to you when I have something to show.”
- Jeremy K.; Chicago, Illinois

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